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CorDharel
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Switzerland
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 Posted - 2004/01/12 : 17:53:29
Hi all!
I just saw the "Who do you think is the Ugliest Hardcore DJ???" thread and thought about myself :D
I am a new music producer and tried to create happy hardcore like my living god on earth scott brown, but it didn't really work :)
Well, I uploaded my newest one of 3 songs and I would be glad to listen what people think about it. I really like my sound, but I have to train a lot to make better music.
Like I said, my goal was to create happy hardcore, but I think it is more psychodelic-gabber or something :)
Please listen to it if you got 5 free minutes and tell me what you think about it.
I hope it is not forbidden to show a track that I have made. I don't want to boast that I am the best producer or something, I just am listening to scotty right now and read the thread.
Also I hope I don't bother anyone with this thread, either to post in the false forum. If I did so, I am sorry!
Right if someone want to the song can be downloaded here:
http://cordharel.bachi.net/sound/CorNewBrand.mp3
If you got some tips for me, I would rejoice a lot.
Greetz CorDharel
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Blue Frequency
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 Posted - 2004/01/12 : 18:12:57
There isn't really a build for it to really drop in. When you're throwing in the drum rolls make sure they lead into something really big the shoves the track right into your face, like around 4:06 into the track. The "ping ping ping ping, pong pong pong pong is pretty static; change it up a bit. "ping ping ping ping pingadi pong, pong pong ponga la la"
^^I know that doesn't make any sense but that was the best way I could convey it.
Break up the bass line a bit too. Throw in maybe some "boom boom boom boom boom badada boom boom boom boom ratatata boom"
something to make you go "YEAH!"
...do it hardcore...
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whispering
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Posted - 2004/01/12 : 18:16:00
The Bass is funny 
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Exhile
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Posted - 2004/01/12 : 18:16:50
I shall have a listen later when im back at home
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raverdave
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Posted - 2004/01/12 : 18:41:34
This is some strange stuff. A bit like a chillout/Gabber fusion with happy elements thrown in and maybe a tiny bit of Japanese sounding stuff in there somewhere. Its definately Original i'll give you that..
You might wanna try putting in some offbeat snares or something, give it a bit more energy. And some bigger breakdowns....
But thankyou, this tune has cheered me up no end. Keep on working at it and welcome to the forums
HaRdCoRe HuStLeR!!! HaRdCoRe HuStLeR!!!
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Simon
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Posted - 2004/01/12 : 18:43:37
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Originally posted by DJ Hoekzema:
I shall have a listen later when im back at home
Same here, I'll listen and tell you what I feel about it later  .
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mr bishi
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Posted - 2004/01/13 : 01:45:19
i thought it sounded like seseme street when it started first ;p
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CorDharel
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Posted - 2004/01/13 : 21:49:19
Thanks for your feedback!
What can I do that the track will be shoved in my face? :)
Ping pingading dong dong dong ;) I'll see what I can do...
Did you also miss the bass? This "wröp wröp wröp wröp"? I didn't know how to do it that's why it is not in the song :)
quote:
But thankyou, this tune has cheered me up no end.
Same here, I also like this song ;)
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Edited by - CorDharel on 2004/01/13 21:51:29 |
CorDharel
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Posted - 2004/01/17 : 14:44:21
Hey all!
I made a new version of the song! Those who liked the first one can download the newer version. Those who didn't here the first one can do it, too ;)
I would be very glad if you can give me some feedback to the new song! I gave it more power and a normal beginning, not a beginning with the beat.
I hope you like the new song.
To download simply follow the same link like in the first post:
http://cordharel.bachi.net/sound/CorNewBrand.mp3
Greetings CorDharel
Greetz from switzerland ^^
HappyHardcore 43\/3R!!!
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kg4
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Posted - 2004/01/17 : 15:18:53
you're on the right track, just keep practicing.
Oh man, I hope I didn't brain my damage...
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Blue Frequency
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Posted - 2004/01/17 : 16:26:44
Its like Flower Gabba. I see fields with bears pounding tribal drums...but the bears are pink...and the smile.
Definitly more organized than the first. Still very fun. Is that bass different? It sounds new.
Maybe give it more of a verse/chours/breakdown definition.
But it was definitly a large jump from the first one and still very fun.
Flower Gabba...it's happier than happyhard core  . How is this possible?
...do it hardcore...
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CorDharel
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Posted - 2004/01/23 : 00:06:28
Alright alright, I already got a new version :) Sounds a lot better than the second one.
Your feedback really helped me to see the right direction I have to go. But, eh, what is flower gabber? 
I hope I don't bore you.
To download simply use the path before or download it from www.mindmuzik.ch
I also got a new track that I love alot. But I really don't want to bother you so I don't post the link now.
Greetz from switzerland ^^
HappyHardcore 43\/3R!!!
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DJ E-Rok
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Posted - 2004/01/23 : 10:14:43
****! that was anoying I downloaded it but when I came bak to the comp to listen to it the song was 1/2 way through so i stoped it then the stupid thing started downloading it all ova again! I'll download it tommorow have to go to bed now got wrk 2mrow :( PS I caught a bit of the bass its like nothin I've herd b4, cya lata
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CorDharel
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Posted - 2004/01/24 : 13:00:13
Uh I'm sorry for ya. I really think you miss something ;)
But I also think about insert another main melody and set the current melody (this chinese thingy) to the background. But I really recommend this song to you, I think it is a really cool track now.
I'm looking forward to hear feedback from you.
Greets CorDharel
Visit my music studio page @ http://www.mindmuzik.ch
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CorDharel
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Posted - 2004/01/24 : 16:09:13
W00000000t!!!!!!
Sorry for the double post, but
I DID IT!!!!
I took another thing in my track, and I fall in love with my song! @:)
Please download it and tell me if you also like the new version of the new version ;)
Visit my music studio page @ http://www.mindmuzik.ch
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