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tru bass
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 Posted - 2009/10/09 :  20:50:42
  
 
        
havn't put a song up on here for a long while soooo 
 
i dont know how i would describe it.. soooo it's hardcore. trancey vibe to it as always with my songs. 
 
http://www.4shared.com/file/139695833/8829d4fc/Brand_new.html  any feedback would be most appreciated as i love it all, negative and positive :)    Cheeeers!
 
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Mortis
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		 Posted - 2009/10/09 :  21:17:32
  
  
  
 
Very interesting track. I like the section at 4 minutes.  
 
Not overly keen on the lead sound and I think the open hat is far too loud, bass maybe could do with some work because it gets lost in the mix a bit.
 
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Ionosphere
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		 Posted - 2009/10/09 :  23:53:42
  
 
  
  
 
I agree with Mortis except the bit at 3:44 is a bit incongruous with what's gone immediately before, it's good but not there, not after a good ravey bit. 
 
I reckon lead into it a bit more gently and give me a chance to come down from ravin' so hard.... 8-/ 
 
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